Business Plan : Perfect Apparel Limited

I have attached my documents 1.0 , 2.0, 3.0 4,0 . My teacher has inserted comments on microsoft  word to edti my mistakes. Please ust edit the mistakes she highlighted tell me if you can see the comments please. At the end, after you finish editing just put them in order all togeher in a single document. PLease inform me if you can find the comments for editing.