Revising prose
1) Be sure to read the tutorial on Lanham's Paramedic Method. There is no way to complete this assignment without that tutorial. It will help you recognize prepositions, "is" forms, and figure out how to replace them with active verbs. It will also explain how to calculate the "lard factor." 2) Choose five of the most convoluted, tortured sentences from your final project rough draft. Copy and...
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