This Is America (Donald Glovers) aka childish

As far as I know, 700 words about Donald Glover aka childish video called “This is America”. I wrote some, but need you to rewrite it and make it organized and sequenced and cited.  The essay needs to be MLA format and analysis about the video and give examples from the video and talk about them, most important thing to have a good thesis statement and nice well-written essay, I never used your service, but hopefully will be the best experience. Deadline is sept 27th. So, i wrote the first draft and the final draft needs to be done. I am uploading the first draft what i wrote. I don’t think it is a good essay i wrote. So, please feel free to rewrite the whole thing if you can to make it look better and professional.