The power of belief

The essay should include a response to both the TED TALK and the ARTICLE

Article: https://www.entrepreneur.com/article/317507
Ted Talk: https://youtu.be/pN34FNbOKXc

the introduction should start with a hook and a short summary to the Ted Talk as well as the article + the thesis statement

I have written a thesis that you might want to include
” In order to succeed, people should understand that the key is not to focus, put more effort or resilience, but it is the growth mindset with the critical thinking and the power of belief.”

Note: most of the essay should include the word I because I should be giving my reaction and connect the ideas to my life
and each body paragraph should start with a topic sentence, the conclusion is just a summary of all the essay. In other words, restating the thesis statement in other words.