Revision
Hello,
this is paper is clearly digressed. I emphasized that this paper is a PUBLIC ADMINISTRATION paper and you should always focus on the public sector (economic boost, job opportunities, wine-themed exhibition and entertainment park), Also, PLEASE, you have to read my professor’ notes and my script in order to write it. You made this paper a purely marketing strategy for this winery and what I look for is how this marketing strategy for this winery is helping economic growth in Wuwei, China by using wine. Please please revise as much as it needs!! Thank you!!!