Looking at how the writing is written, analyze and describe how Laymon constructs his story for maximum effect on the reader.

Laymon, HEAVY: AN AMERICAN MEMOIR, Scribner (Reprint Edition)
ISBN: 978-1501125669 is the book name. I uploaded 2 samples please take a look. we have to have at least 3-4 quotes with very specific detailed analyzation and for the last 2 pages we have to have a revised form basically have to explain what challenges you’ve had when u writing a paper.