Capstone Formal Draft

IMPLICATIONS OF SOCIAL MEDIA USE IN BUDGETING IN MONROE COUNTY, INDIANA  STATE
PLEASE READ AND FOLLOW ALL THE GUIDELINES AND INSTRUCTIONS AND OTHER DOCUMENTS ATTACHED, AS FOLLOWS:
1)    MARKED COMMENTS IN BLUE FONTS IN  THE EVALUATED PROSPECTUS
2)    MUST BE IN APA FOMART
3)    REFERENCE PAGE  MUST BE IN APA FORMAT
4)    MUST ENSURE ALIGNMENT BETWEEN THE VARIOUS ELEMENTS OF THE STUDY.
5)    DISTILL AND REFINE EACH SECTION AND END EACH WITH A STRONG SUMMARY STATEMENT, FOR EXAMPLE, THE PROBLM STATEMENT, PURPOSE, THEORY, RESEARCH QUESTION ETC.
6)    MUST FOLLOW THE PROSPECTUS TEMPLATE ATTACHED AND ALL MUST BE BOLDED;
7)    THE SIGNIFICACE MUST HAVE  POSITIIVE SOCIAL CHANGE AS WRITTEN PREVIOUSLY.
8)    THE BACKGROUND MUST BE TWELVE (12) IN NUMBER AND NOT 7.
9)    MAKE SURE THE RESEARCH QUESTION (S),ARE WRITTEN IN A STYLE THAT CORRESPONDS TO THE METODOLOGY.
10)    THE PROSPECTUS, IS NOT DESIGNED TO BE A LONG DOCUMENT, SO YOU FIND THAT MUCH OF THE DETAILED MATERIAL WILL BE MORE APPROPIRATE FOR THE PROPOSAL.
11)    I have attached the latest iteration with my comments.
12)    We have a lot of work to do.  I am highly recommending that you enroll in a Writing Intensive Workshop.  There are numerous sentences here that are extremely vague and disorganized and not representative of the PHD doctoral level.
13)    When we spoke last, I had asked you (as my announcements have outlined and as the other mentees perform) that the NEW information written be highlighted in blue font.  You highlighted the entire document in blue – even the areas that have not been changed.
14)    The Prospectus turned in is not on the Prospectus Template that we have spoken about each and every time that we have talked on the phone.  The Prospectus turned in for review has not had the areas changed as Dr. Shafer pointed out in formatting as well.
15)    The Background section does not have 10-12 articles highlighted or formatted as is required for this section.
16)    The References are not formatted correctly in APA 6th edition.  Please review your APA 6th edition manual and seek assistance with this issue in the Walden writing assistance or the library.
17)    I look forward to speaking to you regarding the issues found with this latest iteration.
18)    FIND A SUITABLE THEORIST AND ALIGN THE SECTION THAT THEORIST.  PLEASE9, GO TO THE CRQ CENTER FOR  RESEARCH QUALITY AND MAKE AN APPOINTMENT WITH THEM TO HELP WITH THE METHODOLOGY FOR YOUR PROSPECTUS SECTIONS.
19)    AVOID EXTREMELY VAGUE and DISORGANIZED SENTENCES THAT DO NOT REPRESENT OF THE PHD DOCTORAL LEVEL WORK.