analyzing argument essay

Here is two given article , prompt and my previous written essay. I want you to read the previous essay comments in pdf and write and essay about it. You can either fix the essay or rewrite it as in the feedback part. I want you the write an introduction( +thesis)+ 3 body paragraphs + conclusion. You cannot use any other sources than I will be downloading in the files. Essay structure graph will be also in the files as an example. Analyzing argument in each body paragraphs will be like following steps.
1- main claim.
2-subclaim
3-evidence
4-counter-argument.
Please try to do to worksheet before you start write your essay. I will be also uploaded it to be more helpful.