Rhetorical Analysis

The video I was analyzing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SEaFHPvuE6Y

Revision Instructions:
1) you have to incorporate the additional rhetorical concepts, speech structure strategies. etc into your original topical pattern of ethos, logos, and pathos. Keeping everything copy and paste and add a couple of paragraphs does not count for that.
2) the recommended length would be 7 pages instead of 5 pages, still, it needs to be double spaced, typed in MLA format.
3) you are also required to turn in your graded 1st analysis paper along with your second one on Friday.